In a MONOTETRA, each stanza is comprised of four rhymed lines. Each line has four metrical feet, a total of eight syllables. What makes it such a powerful form is that the closing line of each stanza is four syllables, repeated. A Monotetra can have as few or as many stanzas as desired. C’mon, sink your teeth into one! They’re the greatest. You’ll love ’em.
TEMPTATION
On Sunday mornings, I escape
to wait in line with jaws agape
and scope the sugary landscape
of rounded shapes, of rounded shapes
From the case, glazed bodies gleam
filled with jelly, filled with cream
and twisted cinnamon daydreams
Their silent screams, their silent screams
penetrate my helpless brain
and though resistance I might feign
my diet’s headed down the drain
‘cause donuts reign, ‘cause donuts reign
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Ahh donuts! Love the Krispy Kreme glazed. They are a weakness for sure.
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Thanks, T Wayne. I never met a donut (any kind) I didn’t like. 🙂
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Lovely – Joan. I would certainly like to sink my teeth into this kind of poem. Enjoy your Sunday!
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Thanks, Chevvy. Now you know what I do on Sunday mornings! One more form to try when you’re feeling froggy. Or donutty. 🙂
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Yes – one day. Hope you are having a good Sunday my friend 😊
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I like this one Joan.
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Mmmmm…I had a brownie this morning.
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Close enough. Nothing like a good, nutritious breakfast to start the morning… 🙂
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Thanks for the shout-out, Lennon! Hope your Sunday is filled with peace, good tunes, and (of course) donuts. 🙂
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Just Joan
When I reflect I must not moan.
For Joan excels with words alone,
Describing words in verse and tone,
I think of Joan, I think of Joan.
Greetings from Canada, Joan!
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Thanks, Peter! It is the most gratifying feeling to receive response poetry from my readers. It totally rocks to know that I’ve not only gotten people all over the world to READ poetry, but also to WRITE it. You have put a 🙂 on my face!
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I happy to read that you like my little contribution to your poetry blog. I also know about the positive aspect of finding genuine recognition from friends in cyberspace. Have a great week ahead!
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Thanks for teaching me another form I had not heard of.
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You’re most welcome, Conrad! It’s the least I can do to repay you for your consummate hosting and dozens of loaves of raisin bread. Thanks for reading.
PS: When I run out of new forms, I’ll just start making up my own. 🙂
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Oh I love donuts and this made my mouth water. I could taste them! Wonderful stuff 😀
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Thanks, Lana. Poem inspired by the real-life donut case I stand in front of every Sunday, (im)patiently waiting my turn. Gosh, is it only Wednesday? 🙂
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Sadly it is only Wednesday. Is there a pie case? I have a penchant for pies too 😀
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Mmm delicious! Dunkin Donuts is bae 💖😂
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Like you, I write in many different forms. I try to always put the form name on the post so it will pop up on a search. You can search my site, using the little magnifying glass at the top of the page, to see if I’ve written anything in a particular form. Other poets I know have told me it is unusual to do this, most of them pick a form (usually free verse, but one gal writes a lot of sonnets and villanelles) and stick with it. I think the variety is more fun, and the challenge of successfully executing a new form. Sounds like you do, too. 🙂
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I sure do love writing in a variety of different styles! Perhaps we could be ‘linking’ buddies if you will, wherein if we find the other has written in a particular form we link our own poem in that form. What do you think?
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Not sure I know how to do that… usually I just leave a link in the comments so you and your readers can click on it if they want.
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Yeah that’s what I meant… For instance, just now, I loved your ‘Cinquain’, and I linked my own so that I could get your brilliant tips.
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Cool. I’m hip to doing that. I don’t get to my Reader every day, though. I usually post on Sundays and am here for a while answering comments and seeing what’s new. This week’s poem is a triolet series about dementia and caregivers: https://justjoan42.wordpress.com/2018/05/13/when-the-gears-start-slipping/. I was a nurse for 24 years before I started writing poetry. I loved Harry Potter, too. I’m a very nervous public speaker. I like playing Scrabble and watching any kind of detective or police show so I can try and figure out who did it. 🙂
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Of course I understand, I’m not always around either. But I think we could both benefit from this mutual “alliance” of sorts :).
OMG fellow Potterhead!! You should check out my ‘Clerihew’ on Draco Malfoy (https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com/2018/05/11/down-draco-clerihew/). It’s really short and I think you’d really like it.
And about your public speaking, you should try a Toastmasters club if it’s available in your district. It has really helped me overcome my fear of public speaking.
I love watching detective shows as well! Have you watched Sherlock? Benedict Cumberbatch plays an amazing Holmes.
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I watch both versions of Sherlock, the American one and the BBC. Criminal Minds, The Mentalist, The BlackList, Chicago PD, Blue Bloods, NCIS, etc. I do poetry readings for my poetry group and occasionally in larger venues, which has helped my nervousness a little. My poem First Open Mike (https://justjoan42.wordpress.com/2015/11/29/living-the-dream/) is about my first time on stage. Not familiar with “clerihew” (is it a form?) but will check it out.
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Yeah the Clerihew is a form. Check out my poem for a full description of it.
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Here’s a little “clerihew” written just for you:
The scholar with an MFA
who hasn’t anything to say
is less a poet than the teen
whose pen is poised and insight keen
Keep observing, thinking, questioning, and moving that quill (or MacBook). You have a poetic gift, AnaCrazy! 🙂
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Oh my god I love this so much Joan!! Thank you!! This means the world to me
P.S. Your Clerihew is beautiful but entirely untrue
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